This is a record of my learning prior to January 2022.
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Tuesday, 21 August 2018
Sporting moment paragraphs
There was a lady that was a athlete she was at the Rio Olympic
. When she lifted up the weights she was screaming in agony. The lady had tried her very best to lift up the massive weights. Slowly the lady crumpled to the ground.
Teokatai- I like the way you have used some adjectives and adverbs. Good work! From Shea
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