Tuesday, 21 April 2020
Monday, 20 April 2020
Describe the image
What can I see?
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What can I hear?
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What can I touch?
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What can I smell?
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1. I can see a load of people.
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1. I can hear shouting
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1. I can touch the people
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1. I can smell smoke
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2. I can see a massive river.
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2. I can hear the ocean waves clapping together.
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2. I can touch the gun
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2. I can smell sea salt
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3. I can see a guy sleeping.
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3. I can hear gunshots
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3. I can touch the water
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3. I can smell the
gunpowder from the gun. |
4. I can see the ocean.
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4. I can hear the man snoring
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4. I can touch the boats
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4. I can smell
water from the guy that was sleeping. |
5. And I can see guns.
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5. I can hear the dust from the mountain falling
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5. I can touch the grass.
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5. I can smell
bears from their breath. |
Write ONE descriptive sentence per sense using your points from above:
See: They were all fighting over the ocean cause they were super hot.
But the 1 man wouldn't let them only his friends go in and himself and
there was this one man which is his best friend just lying around.
So then one of them just shot him.
But the 1 man wouldn't let them only his friends go in and himself and
there was this one man which is his best friend just lying around.
So then one of them just shot him.
Hear: I can hear people screaming and shouting cause they guy shot
the other guy and then this lady shot the man that shot the other man
and the guy that was sleeping was just snoring and doing nothing.
the other guy and then this lady shot the man that shot the other man
and the guy that was sleeping was just snoring and doing nothing.
Touch: So then the man just woke up and told them that it's gonna be alright
then he told the lady to put down the gun and he threw it all the way on the grass
then he went to go and sleep on the boats.
then he told the lady to put down the gun and he threw it all the way on the grass
then he went to go and sleep on the boats.
Smell: once the man got into the boat he could smell smoke and he smelt sea salt
together he looked under the seat and then there was a man trying to go to
sleep with a smoke in his mouth.
The man could still gunpowder from the gunshots then he had a drink of water.
Then he could smell bears from the other guys breath.
together he looked under the seat and then there was a man trying to go to
sleep with a smoke in his mouth.
The man could still gunpowder from the gunshots then he had a drink of water.
Then he could smell bears from the other guys breath.
Friday, 17 April 2020
Thursday, 16 April 2020
Picture tells
A Picture tells 1000 words.
Topic
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Audience
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Purpose
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A Picture that tells 100 words
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Room 6
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use powerful vocabulary to tell a story.
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Title:
Wednesday, 15 April 2020
Story Starters
=Story Starters
WALT: use powerful vocabulary to make our writing more interesting.
Topic
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Audience
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Purpose
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An Abandoned house
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Room 6
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It's An Old Haunted house.
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Title of story:
Continue your creative writing down here:. One day there was this random old rusty haunted and abandoned house in an out open space there used to be and family that lived in the old rusty haunted and abandoned house there was 2 children a daughter and a son and a mum and dad in there sleep time they always heard strange noises coming from there back yard and up in there bass meant. One day they had brought a dog. They took the dog back to their house.They started to play with their dog like how usually a family like them would do. Then it was getting dark. So then the mum and dad said okay its time for your bedtime now then the 2 children replied nicely to there mum and dad and said okay so they went to go put on their pyjamas and then go and brush their teeth then when they got into their bed they started to hear strange noises from their backyard and basement and there dog so then the 2 children got up super fast and grabbed their mum and dad and then they all went outside to go and check what was going on with the dog and were those strange noises came from? When they went around the corner of the house they saw the dog's chain filled of blood then they all followed the dogs chain and then once they came to the end. they were all shocked and screaming cause at the end of the chain the dog a just lying there with a big BITE mark on its stomach then the dad went inside and grabbed a big plastic bag. The dad went back outside and covered the dog up. Then he called the police. In the morning when the Police arrived they had found out what had happened to the dog and what animal was it that bit the dog then the dad asked what had happened. The police said that the dog had gotten bitten by a huge crocodile. THE END.
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