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Friday, 15 February 2019

Freedom Writing

 Last month I went to the panmure pools to meet my granny. Then we all gathered up together then we went to pray so we can have a nice sunny morning. Then we all just waited until we get hot then we all sprinted to the cold pool then all dived in the pool at it was freezing cold but then it got warmer. Then we went on the castle that was on the water it was amazing. Then at the end we had to slide down a very short slide but it was very slippery. Then i did it one more time it was so funny because i keeped on failing over then i slipped on the slide. Then we all went to the bigger slide it was so funny because when we went up on our first slide we waited until everyone went down then we all blocked the slide and made a long chain. Then we slided down when we all got to the end of the slide the guard told us that we weren't allowed to do that again before we get kicked out but we did it one more time and she wasn't really that happy with us.

Tuesday, 5 February 2019

About me

About me - Writing
Walt: write about ourselves on the internet in a cybersmart way.


Plan
Greeting:
What do you want to welcome with?
Kia ora, Talofa...
Kia ora
Who are you?
Name/ Year/ Teachers
Teokatai I am a year 5 my teacher is Mrs Sio
Interests
I enjoy, I like, My favourite
I always enjoy every time we go out somewhere nice
Sports/ Hobbies
I play, On the weekend,
Swimming in my pool and patting my dog at the back of my house
Other
Anything else?
I love to eat pepperoni pizza.


Check your ideas.
Is all of what you have written Cybersmart?


Final copy for blog
Paste here