Creative Writing
WALT: write in paragraphs.
Planning:
Who: Room 6
What: Time travelled back in time to Year 5/6 Camp
When: 2000 and 2020
Where: Point England School
Mini plan of what I am going to write: One day i went out to go and play a game and
then I saw a really different looking device I touched it and then it took me back to
2000 the END.
then I saw a really different looking device I touched it and then it took me back to
2000 the END.
Intro:
Once upon a time, I walked by a dumpster and found a circular device.
Paragraph 1: There was a little boy named Nick He liked to Explore stuff.
Paragraph 2: I Am going to talk about how Nick got to the 2,000’s
Paragraph 3: THE END
Conclusion: Once upon a time there was a little boy named Nick. Nick liked to
explore random things.
explore random things.
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Start your writing here: Once upon a time there was this little boy named Nick.
Nick was a little boy that liked to explore stuff. When he was walking around he saw a
really
different device on the ground on the device there was a note that said DO NOT TOUCH
Nick was so confused he walked away then his foot accidentally touched the device and
then the device sucked
him up inside the device and then he started to
scream out
HELP!!! Then he was spinning around in circles he stopped and
then went down this steep hole and then he went back into the 2000’s.
He said that it was so fun to go back in time and rewind everything he did back in the past.
He started to go to the old places that he could remember
where he was.
Nick was a little boy that liked to explore stuff. When he was walking around he saw a
really
different device on the ground on the device there was a note that said DO NOT TOUCH
Nick was so confused he walked away then his foot accidentally touched the device and
then the device sucked
him up inside the device and then he started to
scream out
HELP!!! Then he was spinning around in circles he stopped and
then went down this steep hole and then he went back into the 2000’s.
He said that it was so fun to go back in time and rewind everything he did back in the past.
He started to go to the old places that he could remember
where he was.
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