Fairy Tale Changes

Fairytale Changes

WALT: be creative with our writing by using our imagination.

Topic	Audience	Purpose
Fairytale changes	Room 6	Be creative with our writing by using our imagination

Title: Cinder Troller

Details of original story	Details of new and improved story
Characters: Cinderella	Characters: Cinder troller
Setting: Castle	Setting: Auckland
Problem: She's doing all the work and the step mom and her two daughters are treating her wrong.	Problem: Cinder troller has to go to a meeting with her grandmother but she has a lot of things to go through.
Solution: Is to get Cinderella out of that house and away from that family.	Solution: The solution is to wake up at 6am and get ready and go through all those hard things and make it to
Ending: They lived happily ever after.	Ending: The grandmother gave cinder trolloer a brand new dress for a whole 2 years.

Rewrite your version of the fairy tale below:

Once upon a time there was this girl named Cinder Troller. She had to go to a meeting with her grandmother but she had to get everything else done. She had to clean the dishes and wipe the table, she was used to doing the dishes, mopping the floor and cleaning up and all of that stuff. Cinder Troller is a very calm girl. She is 16 and she likes to play with her friends and likes to go and see her parents. Cinder Troller’s mum works at Countdown and her dad builds new houses for new people that don't like their old home. Cinder Troller’s Grandmother wants her to meet up with her because She asked Cinder Troller if she wanted to have an old dress from her when she was younger and then Cinder Troller replied yes please grandmother. Then she said okay meet me at my house before 9.00 okay. Then Cinder Troller replied nicely yes. Then Cinder Troller, after she did all the dishes and that she rushed all the way to the woods