My Travel Journal to Italy …
Instructions:
Your challenge: Is to write a travel journal to Italy.
You will be planning out your itinerary to visit some of Italy’s grand tourist attractions.
Planning of your narrative writing:
Start Writing below: One day i went to Italy by myself.
It was so terrifying and so hard because at night it
was cold and the waves were so rough.
In the blink of an eye
I saw a huge seal swimming towards
me so I tried my hardest to get away from it but the waves were so rough
and the seal would come to me and it was getting faster and faster.
Then I got caught by it and then he took me to an abandoned Island.
I was trapped.
The only way i could get out is
if the seal could go to sleep so
he will hear nothing and he will not notice.
Once i was looking around i was seeing if i
can get a way out then once i was looking around i saw a dolphin and i
tried to get its attention then i got it. I told it to go and grab the closet
and sharpest object around then the dolphin saw a sharp rock and grabbed it
and gave it to me while i was trying to get out the HUGE seal was waking up
so i had to be very careful to make it not hear me.
I was doing it very carefully and then that was the moment
he got up and heard me and tried to stop me
i was so scared but then the dolphin came in the way and
stopped him he was still trying to stop me but i got out and i was
just swimming away and then the dolphin pushed him away
so hard he hit the rock on inside the water and then the Dolphin told me to
hop on his back and then we swam away from the island and swam all the way to
italy once we made it the Dolphin swam away but i told him to stay and then he
stayed i started swimming away with him and the rest of the other kids at italy
came to swim with us to.
It was so terrifying and so hard because at night it
was cold and the waves were so rough.
In the blink of an eye
I saw a huge seal swimming towards
me so I tried my hardest to get away from it but the waves were so rough
and the seal would come to me and it was getting faster and faster.
Then I got caught by it and then he took me to an abandoned Island.
I was trapped.
The only way i could get out is
if the seal could go to sleep so
he will hear nothing and he will not notice.
Once i was looking around i was seeing if i
can get a way out then once i was looking around i saw a dolphin and i
tried to get its attention then i got it. I told it to go and grab the closet
and sharpest object around then the dolphin saw a sharp rock and grabbed it
and gave it to me while i was trying to get out the HUGE seal was waking up
so i had to be very careful to make it not hear me.
I was doing it very carefully and then that was the moment
he got up and heard me and tried to stop me
i was so scared but then the dolphin came in the way and
stopped him he was still trying to stop me but i got out and i was
just swimming away and then the dolphin pushed him away
so hard he hit the rock on inside the water and then the Dolphin told me to
hop on his back and then we swam away from the island and swam all the way to
italy once we made it the Dolphin swam away but i told him to stay and then he
stayed i started swimming away with him and the rest of the other kids at italy
came to swim with us to.
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