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Thursday 16 April 2020

Picture tells

A Picture tells 1000 words.


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A Picture that tells 100 words
Room 6
use powerful vocabulary to tell a story.


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Pictures always tell a story. Even when we read picture books, there’s a story that goes alongside a picture so the readers understand what is happening.

Write the story that goes along with the picture above: One day there was this big huge massive rock in the middle of this beach there was thousands of them lying around the beach. Every single rock under it there is a massive crab like half its size and just small little ones. One day there was a family that went to the beach because they were trying to find that big massive crab under that big massive rock. Every time one of them would go near a massive rock there would be hundreds of those little crabs running out of the rock 1 by 1. The dad always had to look after the kids cause if 1 of the kids got bitten by the big massive crab there will be a big bad bite mark on the spot where they got bitten and they will only survive for 7 days. When they were going to the other side of the beach they were trying to get away from that big massive crab when they arrived at a good calm place all they saw was just little baby and the big massive crab coming towards them when they saw them all running towards them they started to scream and start to run all the way to there car they all made it to the car but the crabs made it first they were all surrounding the car. As the crabs were crowding the car the dad tried to defend the big crab and told the family to go for the little crabs and he ment like grab a stick or something like that and whack the crabs away from there car. Once they defeated all the little crabs there was just one big massive crab left. They all helped the dad trying to defend the big crab then the littlest one helped the family and bit the crabs leg after that the crab screamed and looked down at the small crab then the little crab ran away then the big massive crag looked at it then started to chase after it the big massive crab started to run as fast as it could but the big crab just caught it and then put it up to its mouth and then dropped it then the dad dashed so fast he bumped the big massive crab off and then the dad told the little crab to run as fast as it can then the mum got up and then grabbed a big heavy sharp pole and gave it to the dad. The dad grabbed it and then stabbed it right through the head. After when the dad did that they all ran to the car and then got in their seats and all happy they once they tried to drive away there was 1 more crab left in the front of their car they stopped to see what was going on and then they just figured out that t was the little crab and then it came by the door and then the crab asked if the dad can wine down his window so then the dad did what he said so then the crab grabbed his shirt and then took him out and put him where all the crabs were then the mum and the 2 children were screaming and then the crabs got up and then ate him up and then the kids started to laugh. THE END.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Teokatai,
    I am so impressed with the story you have written here. I would love to see you continue to practice your writing as you are both good at it and you seem to like writing as well. Just a small thing but I wondered if next time you could put in some more full stops - especially in the scary parts as they makes it even more exciting.
    Keep it up Teokatai - it is so nice to read a really good story that has a beginning, middle and end.
    Love Mrs Bush

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